- Reflection from feedback I received in my last pitch:
- I felt that my feedback was fair in reference to being criticized by having not enough emotion in my first elevator pitch. One of the critics explained how an elevator pitch should always incorporate emotional expression to demonstrate the severity of the idea you are trying to stress to an employer or authoritative figure in an organization.
- What did you change, based on the feedback?
- In my first elevator pitch, I based the speech off of prior knowledge of the sole purpose in selling myself instead of an idea I am trying to sell. My previous elevator pitch consisted of just elaborating about my attributes and experiences. In this elevator pitch I initiated my concern about the modern trend that I have been addressing in past posts.
Friday, October 20, 2017
17A - Elevator Pitch No.2
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Hey Ricardo!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the idea you presented in your pitch. I also liked how you focussed more on your topic and solution this time! I have two suggestions for your next elevator pitch. If you have the ability, I would have someone else take the video for you so the angle is better and so there is more natural light. The other suggestion I have, is to try to not move around as much. I did the same thing because I was a little nervous. I moved my hands a lot in the first pitch I did and I tried doing better with that in the second. Overall, I think you did a great job!