- URL:
- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QPaTiPkLWjA
- Reflection from last Elevator Pitch:
- From the last elevator pitch I received feedback on my overwhelming use of hand movement. Also, to be less animated when it comes to addressing my pitch for the proposal. I was also advised to have someone else video tape me to promote more natural lighting. My idea was really praised and given many complements.
- What I changed:
- I was consciously limiting my hand movement throughout this elevator pitch. I felt a lot more confident in providing the pitch. In regards to having someone record me, I did have anyone around me to satisfy the favor. I was not able to fulfill that suggestion.
Friday, November 10, 2017
22A - Elevator Pitch No.3
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Hey Ricardo! I didn't have someone able to record this pitch for me this time around either but I still think you did a great job on giving your pitch. Your hand movements were great and they weren't distracting from the importance of your words! It looked like you were standing too in your pitch so that is good! Pitches always look better when someone else takes them but sometimes it's just not possible so I understand the predicament you were in and I think you made the mots of your situation! Good post!
ReplyDeleteHey there! Honestly I thought this one was really executed really well. I don't think someone else recording you was that big of a deal because if we were in class for this or actually trying to convince someone to invest in your idea no one would be recording. I had my Boyfriend record me and I couldn't stay focused which you seemed to do perfectly. Your hand movement seemed controlled and with what you were saying so I didn't see that as an issue. My only suggestion at this point is to enunciate your words better. It just might be the quality of the sound from the video honestly. But over all GREAT JOB!!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat post Ricardo! I think you did an excellent job on your elevator pitch. You really showed confidence on presenting your business idea. I don't think the fact that you were sitting really affected the execution of the elevator pitch. Like some of the other people who commented said; I do think your hand movements really did help your case.
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